Montgomery (Marked Ziggurat) Book 1 [Draft]

Prologue:
There comes a time that we all screw things, curse things and be withdrawn with the wrong side or part.
We may all shall try being the bad guys or gals and rebel like teenage hormones. Raging inside and flames ricochet.
We all shall take advantage of the innocence, pure and angels.
BUT, is there a clan committing this wholesomely? With a stone for a heart? Maybe “stone” would be an understatement, it is more than that.
BUT with LOVE, could it be some random cliché scenes and young ones ruling it?
A simple life, still plain simple?
LOVE, not just for a lover but for familiar relatives.
Secrets, lies, desires, despairs and sting.
But started with, fun, friendship and teenage life?
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A Glimpse of ending...
In a faraway view,
they are side to side. Hardly dealing what’s troubling them.
One of the Minho swiftly swayed near her ears to barely whisper his question..
“Why would you love someone who’s not even capable of loving?” He mumbled daringly and …smirked, to hide a hint of guilt.
It’s the right thing to do. Finish it.
“Cause I’m a sadist, darling” She coldly retorted with her pretty face.
She’s a Montgomery, after all.

.~Year started: 2015
Reached #98 for Short story
*Smileys

Author’s note :3
SHORT yet a THRILLER
But an amateur for sure *~*
And it is mostly a teenager stuff not an adult one, for I too, is thirteen years of age only 
I'm a certified newbie dealing with my heavy plot. :)
Wonder dear!_Famously-Unknown_
-AyeexoleegreyhamCole^-^
Genre/section/style/focus/…
• Teen fiction
• Mystery
• Humor (try)
• Romance (slight)
• Violence (Teen rated)
• English
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[[Hello there, So...Only eight chapters were out for some alteration/modification/revision and for planning. Mostly in the aspect of point of views. (Working on that)]] Thanks, again. =)