This is a rewrite of 'The Despairing Determination' for 1. I didn't like how I started the story for my character, Alice, due to the fact that I actually had no idea of how to write it in the first place, and 2. I feel like I've finally come up with a decent enough creepypasta story for her and I finally know what kind of person I want her to be. I'd advise younger or sensitive readers to not read it if they're uncomfortable with topics related to death, horror, gore, etc. Otherwise, I hope that you guys enjoy it as I finally try to write this whole thing out!