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Ongoing, First published Feb 11
Mature
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"It's kind of my job to worry about you." Henry says as he starts to get up to his feet. 

"Is it? You, Vera and Rosary are the only once who seem to care about us weaker Nhadars." Lupuna says with a warm smile. He doesn't know what to say to it, so he only gives her a trying smile before walking back to Ficus. 

"What do you need?" Henry asks as he looks down to Ficus who are looking over Pine's injuries. 
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This is a excerpt from a epic fantasy book I'm working on and I would highly appreciate some feedback on some of the chapters I've written. But be warned, it's only a second draft of the first draft, so I'm still working on it. 
This book is also published on Inkitt and there more chapters out there than on Wattpad as I started to publish it there before I figured I'd try it here too.
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"Shift." His voice hit me like a serrated blade as he stepped out of the crude semicircle of hardened wolves that had formed around me. I pushed myself off of the cold floor for what felt like the thousandth time that day, wiping the small trail of blood coming off of my lip and down my chin. "I won't ask you again." My limbs felt like lead, these wolves had been at me for hours trying to get me to shift into my wolf, unbeknown to them was that their efforts would forever be futile considering the fact my wolf wouldn't make an appearance for me even when I begged. I seriously doubted she would suddenly pop up as a result of their abusive tactics. Instead of explaining my circumstances, driven by a bizarre combination of adrenaline and fatigue, I leaned back on my heels and sent the largest loogie I'd ever conjured flying over and landing squarely between the eyes of the man before me. oOoOoOoOoOo As a late bloomer who was incapable of shifting yet, let alone making any contact with her wolf, Olive Ludovic's life was not off to the best start. Growing up, constantly being tormented and taunted by those around her forced Olive to grow a tough skin and work even harder, despite the fact she was without her wolf. When her home is taken over by a dark pack, life seems to only get worse for Olive as it is quickly discovered that her mate is none other than Matteo, the Alpha of the very pack that was terrorizing her people. It seems to her, that life is just a little bit easier for Olive the Other Werewolves. oOoOoOo hello! just fyi there will be mature language and content as the book progresses so i'm letting ya know now ;) HIGHEST WEREWOLF RANKING = 2, LOVE RANKING = 3 (out of 1.8 million books XD), MAGIC RANKING = 1, ROMANCE RANKING = 1 (out of 1.5 million books XD), VAMPIRE RANKING =1!