Snippet: "It's kind of my job to worry about you." Henry says as he starts to get up to his feet. "Is it? You, Vera and Rosary are the only once who seem to care about us weaker Nhadars." Lupuna says with a warm smile. He doesn't know what to say to it, so he only gives her a trying smile before walking back to Ficus. "What do you need?" Henry asks as he looks down to Ficus who are looking over Pine's injuries. - This is a excerpt from a epic fantasy book I'm working on and I would highly appreciate some feedback on some of the chapters I've written. But be warned, it's only a second draft of the first draft, so I'm still working on it. This book is also published on Inkitt and there more chapters out there than on Wattpad as I started to publish it there before I figured I'd try it here too.
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