The Messenger's Mistake (ONC entry)
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A young witty city woman naming Lydia McCartney has now entered the afterlife and was on her way to the bridge where newly arrived souls come to know where they headed. All going smooth, seeing a lot of dead people talking how they've died that's great to hear...for some people. When it was Lydia's turn, it become a big shocker! Her name was on the list but she couldn't seem to get through the bridge, things were surely in a buzz which Lydia shouldn't get rid of. The Receptionist at the bridge called to tell Lydia about a mishap in the souls scrolls, known as the to-do-lists of the reapers that was now currently mended by the messengers.
But still, it wasn't the answer to Lydia's question on why she couldn't get across until a newbie messenger, Thalia, secretly admitted to her that it was her who made the mistake and wanted to seek for Lydia's help to fix it in able to get her not-so-dead life back. Of course both of Thalia and Lydia's time were running out so they gotta move fast and find that lost message in time.
Question is, can they do it before its too late? Can Thalia be able to mend her clumsy mistake?
Can Lydia get her sweet life back without any demons prowling around?
*This Story is an entry to the ONC 2024...so hope you people enjoy reading it and never forget to support the hard work! Thank you❤️*
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