COMATOSE
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Last published Thu, Oct 17, 2024
Five prisoners were put into a controlled coma as an experimental mental recovery. All of them will be subjected to relive their crime scenarios and have the opportunity to change their ways.
If one of them fails to do this, all five will be subjected to the host's choices of following events.
If the prisoners pass this experiment, they get a shorter sentence as well as their freedom from the coma.
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