Coup of Carcase

Hello and welcome to my first serious story. I want to make a few things clear: I am not a talented writer, so I'll be grateful if you can help me fix my mistakes or provide feedback.

Secondly, it's essential to note that this story is not intended to generate hate towards any minorities. If you find anything offensive, I apologize, but that's not my intention.
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About the World:
The narrative unfolds in the year 269 in a fictional world reminiscent of the Victorian era, complete with period fashion and firearms, comparable to our history around 1870. The languages in this world mirror those of our reality, albeit with different names. Similarly, the countries present in this world share similarities with ours, but they go by distinct names or are entirely new entities.

About the Story:
The tale delves into the life of a retired officer and his struggles post-war as he endeavors to find his place in the world. However, his journey won't be a walk in the park, as the anthropomorphic revolution is gaining momentum. Our protagonist is faced with a challenging decision: will he stand by his former comrades, or will he align himself with the government in the midst of this uprising?

This conflict introduces a gripping dynamic, forcing the retired officer to confront his loyalties and choose a side in the face of the escalating anthropomorphic revolution. The story is set against a backdrop of political unrest, adding layers of complexity to our protagonist's quest for purpose and identity in a world undergoing significant transformation.