Maybe it's Only Us | Lord of the Flies
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  • Reads 517
  • Votes 22
  • Parts 5
  • Time 1h 21m
Ongoing, First published Mar 06, 2024
"Only the Devil knows how much hate I hold for you, Jack Merridew."

•••
The kids on the island; they were poetry. 
Ralph was alliteration; starting off the same, time and time again, hoping for a different ending
Julia was rhyming; Trying a number of different things, just to end up in the same place.
Together, they would make repetition. It would be easy, it could be all that was needed. 
But was it really any fun?
You may be wondering what Jack is in all of this.

Jack...
Well if they're alliteration and rhyming, then Jack is Slam Poetry
Or a haiku... you never know with that kid



Note: LOTF is an original work belonging to William Golding. I lay no claim to any characters or the plot. I only hold ownership of my own original character and the changes to the plot caused by her.
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The Lord of the Flies is a very famous novel by William Golding, first published in 1954. Since then it has been studied by millions of school pupils, including myself. In this story I will write a reimagining of the story, using most of the same characters and the same situation with everyone stranded on an island. But this time Jack will be much more successful in his bid to be chief. There will be some other changes too, including a couple of girls among the boys! This time it will not be only all boys! But the two girls will be very outnumbered, how will they handle being with so many boys? Please don't read this expecting it to be exactly like the original novel, its a reimagining, it will not be exactly the same but many of the things in the novel will still be here, but written differently with different outcomes