Thieve's tango - Draft

DO NOT EXPECT THIS ONE IN SPECIFIC TO EVER FINISH.
I started writing my novel, and quickly felt insecure about my writing. Seeing that I already wrote enough for some sort of "premises" of what it'll be, I thought, let's publish that on where it most likely to be criticized. Internet.
With you, hopefully, constructive criticism, i hope to change stuff here and there and publish a full version one day. This is a fully accepted draft, that hopes to receive the critiques.
Trigger warnings for level of maturity : mentioned, not extremely depicted acts of putting one's body in an objectifying manner, brief mention of prostitution in a light-hearted way. Mentions of corpses and organs, criminal activity
Not everything is written and all, bla bla, bla, but yeah. Now, the rest of the description is facultative.

Summary of the story :
After a turn of events, a showman finds himself partner in crime with a wandering thief. Together, they steal the city of windfall, in a medieval fantasy setting, inspired by Dungeons And Dragons. But one day, after a certain heist, their beloved world isn't quite the same anymore...