In 'I Give Up,' shaydhd delves into the depths of disillusionment and despair, confronting the harsh realities of a world that often seems to favor luck over effort and extinguish hope in the face of adversity. Through raw and unfiltered verse, the author wrestles with feelings of inadequacy, loss, and the temptation to surrender to the flames of despair. Yet, amidst the darkness, a glimmer of resilience emerges as the poet defiantly renounces the shackles of expectation and embraces the power of self-determination. With stirring conviction, the poem becomes a rallying cry for reclaiming agency, rejecting defeat, and illuminating the world with the transformative force of love and perseverance. 'I Give Up' is a poignant reflection on the human spirit's capacity to rise above despair and shine brightly in the face of darkness.
Most of this is sad, any TW will be at the start of them
I'm a 17 y/o just wanting to share some of my poetry with people other than my friends :]
(Also feel free to comment any tips and how I could improve on my writing!)