Twisted Waters
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Last published Wed, Mar 13, 2024
A woman who dedicated herself to an unending cycle of guilt; she was constantly going around in circles. Lost in the mist there, she realized. Hoping that she'll be found and validated one day.
Will she be spared or will she drown even further in the utter darkness?
Alone, Empty, and Helpless.
With the help of a fleeting glimpse of light that she sees in the surface of water from above, she vowed to be on top of it and see the world itself for its beauty.
Fortunately, someone extended their hand in the cold and empty darkness- lending his aid that will mark the end of her misery.
"Will you take my hand?" he uttered.
Afraid and Trembling. She reached out.
This starts the love born of guilt-depraved and barely hanging on.
A love beyond repair; like twisted waters.
"Please save me"
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