Taqdeer
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  • Parts 6
  • Time 36m
  • Reads 169
  • Votes 29
  • Parts 6
  • Time 36m
Ongoing, First published Mar 18, 2024
"Careful with where those payals take you, thamiyn"

Zehan Ashtar, a Man who lived 29 years of his life, giving up every single dream and expectations, as a child he was never given the affection he needed instead of toys he was handed a gun, when a boy who barely lived even 7 years of his life, was supposed to take someone else's soul out of their body
With trembling hands and fearful eyes, he pulled the trigger, jerking back because of the force, a thud echoed, there layed a lifeless body as blood pooled through the it's head, the eyes of the cold corpse, open, one could see the misery and ache but all Zehan heard was the laughter of his father, who praised him for the first time in his 7 years of life. The hunger to prove himself, turned him into someone who you could call a monster, but he became worse, at 14 year old, Zehan asked for the culprit who betrayed their company, stabbing him inhumane times, without a glint of mercy, or a single tremble, just hollow eyes, holding vengeance, taking the traitor's life did not satisfy him, so he started looking for the only heir the betrayer had.


Gul Rizvi, a 22 year old girl, for whom, her family was everything, never bowing even if it costs her life, at 7 years of her age, when her father was dragged out of their house infront of her and her mother's eyes, she was filled with pure rage, slaughtering the man who was trying to take her father, but it was of no use since he wasnt alone, a gas filled their once rose scented room, the only faint memory was the way her father wasnt anywhere near, but was sent in a box in pieces the next day, she swore that she would end the bloodline of the one's who brought up this misery.
The only picture she had in her mind was of the ring, the ring which caused this.


Can her rose heart, pierce through the cage he built around his beating organ, which is nothing but a reason why hes alive, or will they loathe each other to the point they ruin what could have saved them?
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