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  • Reads 17
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  • Parts 6
  • Time 24m
Ongoing, First published Mar 20, 2024
Taylor Carrie Scot is moving to a new city. Her parents got big time jobs, and they are very, very busy. She's an only child, no nanny, no toys, nothing. She has a hard time making friends, yada, yada... after some weeks, during P.E, which Taylor really, very loves, she's doing rock climbing, when a boy her age scares her and she falls. (WITH NO SAFETY) Then VERY later on in the story, Taylor hits her head on a rock and gets a major concussion. She's rushed to the hospital with no wait. She's there for days, weeks, months, almost even a year. But each day of those months, her parents didn't even visit her. They had no intention of doing it either. When Taylor finally wakes up, she's seen in a hospital bed, and met with a doctor that looked like she was in her mid-forties. Taylor quickly asks what happened and starts hyperventilating, as per usual. The doctor quickly reassures her that she is fine and that she fell and hit a rock, had a concussion, and was in an eight month coma. Of course, Taylor freaks out and asks for her parents. The doctor looks down and said they weren't there. They were never there. Taylor's face is met with shock. Her parents weren't even there when she had a coma? When she was rushed to the hospital? Taylor fumes. She came up with a plan for revenge. Surprisingly, she didn't end up with amnesia or any side effects from the coma, and was free to leave the next day. But that wasn't her plan... Soon after, she realizes that there is something seriously wrong with her life, and she wants to find out what it is. (At some point, I do different points of view.)

the story is awful and horribly written but gets better!!!!!! 
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Eliona's War 3: Lethal Healer

87 parts Ongoing

When the truth comes out, there's nowhere left to run. Season 3 of Eliona's War *** When Seth received a new virtual reality video game from his uncle, he wasn't expecting to get swept up into a whole new world called Eliona. As it turned out, Eliona and its people are far more dangerous than Seth could ever have imagined. There is a real consequence to playing this game: it's changing him, and it might not be for the better. Now that Seth/Severance knows the truth of Eliona, there's no going back. Eliona is dying, and in order to save it, he needs to beat a very difficult dungeon before anyone else does. And on Earth, things are even worse. It's come to light that Eliona is leaving a mark on its players, and suddenly, everyone wants to be involved. Players find themselves with a target on their back, and Seth? He might just have the biggest one of all. Too bad for them, he's done running. *** Weekly updates on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Wait & read for free, or unlock with coins-the choice is yours!