The thing in my backyard

Reads 72
Votes 4
Parts 4
Time 16m

Reads 72
Votes 4
Parts 4
Time 16m

This story isn't finished!! I really want to finish the book, I would LOVE any feedback I can possibly get!! 
    
    
    Summary: Young Michael struggles with bullying and self-doubt, particularly in the presence of his older brother and his brother's friends. After stepping outside to gaze at the pool and breathe, he begins to encounter strange, supernatural forces, including a talking tree named Aegros, who challenges Michael's courage and self-worth. As Michael grapples with these eerie encounters, he is drawn into a deeper, unsettling journey that forces him to confront his fears, both physical and emotional, in order to prove himself.
    
    
    
    
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This story isn't finished!! I really want to finish the book, I would LOVE any feedback I can possibly get!! 
    
    
    Summary: Young Michael struggles with bullying and self-doubt, particularly in the presence of his older brother and his brother's friends. After stepping outside to gaze at the pool and breathe, he begins to encounter strange, supernatural forces, including a talking tree named Aegros, who challenges Michael's courage and self-worth. As Michael grapples with these eerie encounters, he is drawn into a deeper, unsettling journey that forces him to confront his fears, both physical and emotional, in order to prove himself.
    
    
    
    
    (The cover is just something I put together on Canva)

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