Critical Error
xMagic666
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  • Reads 264
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  • Parts 6
  • Time 44m
xMagic666
Complete, First published Mar 22, 2024
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Based on a DnD campaign, Critical Error is a dramatic narrative set in a post-apocalyptic world, focusing on the protagonist, Ryan, who is faced with the devastation caused by a catastrophic event. The writing is vivid and descriptive, painting a picture of a desolate landscape and a protagonist struggling to survive amidst chaos and danger. Ryan is portrayed as a determined and resourceful character, willing to risk his life to help others and overcome the challenges he faces.
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