The Promise
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I'm dropping off Brook home and when I get back my clothes better be hung up and we will talk about this later!" He doesn't wait for a response from me and leaves. I'm honestly too scared to move until I hear the front door slam shut and the car starts and he drives. I'm hyperventilating at this point and tears flow down my cheeks as I curl up into a ball and shut my eyes. After a while of lying down, I hear footsteps from the other room. I'm so tired from the day and the crying I don't care if Leo finds me asleep and his clothes all over the place. I see his figure walk towards me. I realize this isn't Leo this person has a figure of someone familiar and my brain starts to panic but my heart is calm. They bend down and touch my head. But I still find my body too tired to wake up just my conscience. "Rose..." Connor is here? "How can you let that man walk all over you and talk to you like that? You simply added curves and that ass is very appealing to me in my opinion that man has it all to what I'm looking at right now.. " From all of the yelling I simply crook out "Connor... what are y..you.. do..doing here?" he smiles brushing my bangs out of my face. " Shhhh.....I wanted to make sure you are happy." He says as he slowly reaches me and wipes my dried tears. I don't speak I start to lose my sense of conscience. I hear him say one more thing "Not until I see my Rose truly bloom again. As I promised" he whispers into my ear. Then I doze off to sleep.
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Moving In

Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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