Can You Hold Me?
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Last published Sun, May 18, 2025
Vritika Deshmukh thought that she was leading a very predictable life. A flawless boyfriend and a much-required truce with her dysfunctional family. She had everything she needed. Or so she assumed.
What comes to pass when life knocks at her door with unforeseen add-ons? Everything she presumed she had figured out makes no sense anymore.
As she navigates through the sea of issues hurdling at her as gigantic waves, she finds herself dealing with storms she has never caught sight of before.
What would she do when one such storm sweeps through her most beloved bond leaving it in ruins?
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Sahir Goel thought that he had it all. Think about anything? He will most likely own it. Or so he believed.
What happens when his heart dreams about something beyond his reach only to get played in the hands of circumstances?
Life lays its cards in front of him as his strong foothold on the groundwork of oblivion, expertly built by him, staggers out of sudden.
What would be the measures he will put up with to mend the damage done by the twists of the fates in the guise of life?
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