Adommy nighttime

This is my first story. Please don"t kill me XD
Sorry for my bad english. I never learned english
Please tell me what do you think my first story?
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Adam's POV

I woke up furiously. In the middle of the night to someone knocking in my door.
What is it?
*no reaction*
I open my door. He is tommy. And he is drunk.
-Tommy!! What Are you doing here at 3.30! I asked
-Hi b-babyboy.
-Oh Tommy you are drunk
-N-no i'm not drunk. i'm not drunk i'm just drinking. He screaming
-Okay Tommy just please come on in.
he could sit down to the couch
-Tommy can you saying for me what are you doing here?
-I thought you glad to me. /he looked me sadly/
-Tommy i'm glad for you,but it is 3.30am. I'm tired and You know, we have a few hours of band practice.
-I'm really sorry Adam.I’m so sorry waking you up /He looked at the floor sadly/
*i hug him *
-Oh it's okay kitty. i'm not angry at you.
-Y ou are not?but i wake you./he smile shy and little drunk./
-Yeah you waking me. But you are very cute when you are drunk. /I smiled/.And now tommy you go to sleep
-Can i sleep with you? /he looked me with puppy eyes/
-Of course kitty you can
-Thanks.
-It’s fine,let’s go to bed.”
So they laid down in my bed and I took Tommy into my arms
-Babyboy?
-Yeah?
-Thank you. You are the best
-It's okay kitty. Now go to sleep
-Ookay. Good night babyboy
-Good night my pretty kitty /i kissed his forehead/ After a time he slept.
i looking at the digital clock. is it 5.30am. Ican sleep few hours.I easy slept with tommy in my arms