Time does not take away, nor does Separation

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Parts 2
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"The stadium stands breathless. There are no cheers, no calls. There is only the quiet flurry of anticipation and the beating of a million hearts in tandem. There is only the joined prayers of 2 billion people who are all awaiting a miracle.


The dull thud of the blunt edge of the bat hitting the pitch. The scrap of a foot against the turf.


The low beeps of a oscilloscope and the dragged in breathes of a life that has fought long and was now on the verge of giving up

A tale of love, redemption and most importantly,  of friendship 

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