Vrishasen's Vatsyala: a doomed love story (Karna Series 6)
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  • Time 17h 46m
Complete, First published Apr 04, 2024
It is the sixth story of the Karna Series. Long ago a girl born out of her loving parents, Dau Balram and his wife Rebati. Her mother hailed from Satya Yug whose father discovered a suitable groom for his only daughter in Dwapar Yug, in the elder sibling of Lord Krishna. Their love story was unique in nature and to also the girl them got as a Boon of their love. The sky, innocent girl with longest eyelashes and pink cheeks fell in love in her early childhood days with the son of the so-called enemy of them. She loved the eldest son of Karna, Vrishasen.

However her love story was not so easy as the boy was in love with someone else. Whether she can be able to get hold of his heart? Can she be able to make him understand her feelings who had never looked at her direction with love? What will be in the fdestiny of their union? Will she accept him even after knowing of his short life span? Will she have to surrender herself in front of fate? Will she bear him a child? How will she stay apart from her first and only love Vrishasen till her end? 

This is May fan fiction story based on the epic of Mahabharata. The cheaters are taken from there but the situation indicated here and screen play is all of mine. I don't want to hurt anyone's religious beliefs or sentiments. This is not a story on Karna or Arjuna or Krishna. So keep it in mind. The copyright is of mine. The pictures are taken from public domains. Images courtesy: Google Chrome, YouTube and Pinterest.
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