It was my mistake ( Luisa X Asher)
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Huling na-publish Sun, Apr 20, 2025
Basically, its my SECOND story. this is based on real life. Whatever happens in this story is actually according to my friend's cousin.
Luisa is an ordinary girl, not that brilliant girl, girlie, dont have any fashion sense, introvert, ugly.
While, Asher is a brilliant student who's roll is 02. wears glasses, caring, extrovert, ugly but not much 🐸.
Asher is bestfriend of Luisa's friend Alisha. Luisa has been liking Asher for 8months but never proposed him. While, Asher loves Alisha. they were in a relationship but it was not good. They broke up after 25days. Suddenly, Something happened that ruins Luisa's life.
Luisa thought about suicide but as its haram in Islam, She didnt tried. Alisha was a whore girl ( or should i say She Is A Whore Girl)
i hope you guys will like this story. and Most importantly Thank you for reading my boring story
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BEYOND THE SUNSET
"How could you tell me when your all focus was on this freaking witch! When you should have paid attention to me! YOUR OWN WIFE! BUT NO YOU HAD ANOTHER SIDE CHICK FOR THAT!. DISGUSTING!" "ANAYA SHUTUP!" He marched towards me, full red in anger. "ASHER! DON'T!" I heard Daniyal bhai's demanding shout. "Ask her to get out of my sight!" He glared me. "Really? After everything you did to me. You want me to get out of your sight?" I mocked. "Yes or else you won't like what I will say next." I stared him. What a jerk he is.. ________________________________________ When young souls get tied into a knot together and that too incidentally, Asher would start to hate her but the Anaya always waits for him to be nice with her. But Asher's on and off behavior made Anaya tired and lose control and when she decided to end their relationship, Asher started to build feelings for her. But Anaya started to hate him more. How will they end up together when they never wanted to be in any kind of relationship in such a young age. let's see how Asher will treat her and how Anaya will tolerate him more.
My Enemy, My Professor
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𝑫𝒓. 𝒁𝒖𝒍𝒂𝒊𝒅 𝑨𝒇𝒂𝒏𝒅𝒊 𝒊𝒔𝒏'𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒂𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒈𝒆 𝒅𝒐𝒄𝒕𝒐𝒓 𝒃𝒖𝒕 𝑰𝒏𝒂𝒓𝒂 𝑰𝒃𝒓𝒂𝒉𝒊𝒎 𝒊𝒔 𝒂𝒏 𝒂𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒈𝒆 𝑷𝒂𝒌𝒊𝒔𝒕𝒂𝒏𝒊 𝒎𝒆𝒅𝒊𝒄𝒂𝒍 𝒔𝒕𝒖𝒅𝒆𝒏𝒕. 𝑫𝒊𝒗𝒆 𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒃𝒐𝒐𝒌 𝒕𝒐 𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒊𝒓 𝒉𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒍𝒐𝒗𝒆 𝒔𝒕𝒐𝒓𝒚❤️🔥 ✿𝙏𝙍𝙊𝙋𝙀𝙎✿ ᯓᴀɢᴇ ɢᴀᴘ ᯓʜᴏsᴘɪᴛᴀʟ ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄᴇ ᯓᴇɴᴇᴍɪᴇꜱ ᴛᴏ ʟᴏᴠᴇʀꜱ ᯓɢʀᴜᴍᴘʏ × ꜱᴜɴꜱʜɪɴᴇ ᯓᴀʀʀᴀɴɢᴇᴅ ᴍᴀʀʀɪᴀɢᴇ ᯓᴘʀᴏꜰᴇꜱꜱᴏʀ × ꜱᴛᴜᴅᴇɴᴛ ᡣ𐭩 𝙎𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙨: 𝘾𝙤𝙢𝙥𝙡𝙚𝙩𝙚 ᡣ𐭩 "I hate you!" "You mean love" "No way. I meant what I said. I hate you" "So you hate me?" "Absolutely!" "No problem! I hate you too"Kumpleto
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Love us like you do
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Bewilderment
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Out of Touch
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10 Years
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Log Off
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I Will Always be his REPLACED BRIDE
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IT WASN'T LOVE
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For The Press
Asher rolls his eyes and then turns back to me. "One more." He leans back in and kisses me for a second, biting my lip and then pulling away. He leans his forehead against mine and breathes deeply. "I don't think I can fucking contain myself tonight if you're gonna look like that." I look up at him and feel everything become molten. ༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛ 𝗔𝗹𝗹𝗶𝗲 𝗦𝘂𝗺𝗺𝗲𝗿𝘀 ↬ she's your basic, molded into the background, type girl. She does everything she can to stay unseen. The only people she can trust are her friends, but they don't even know about all of her trauma. No one does. She's just trying to get through highschool so that she can leave her town, and never look back. ༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛ 𝗔𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗟𝗼𝘃𝗶𝗻𝗴 ↬ he's your average, female loved, boy. Well, kinda average. He just happens to be one of the most popular singers of his generation. All girls love him, all guys envy him. He's been touring around Europe for a while, but he's ready for a break. He ends up moving to Calloway, New York, to take a break from his career. But, Calloway just happens to be the town Allie lives in. ༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛༛ 𝗪𝗵𝗲𝗻 𝗮 𝗺𝗶𝘀𝗵𝗮𝗽 between the two happens at school, rumors start to spread that they're dating. The two are forced to pretend to have a relationship for the sake of Asher's career. But, a lot can happen when you fake date a rockstar 𝗙𝗼𝗿 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗣𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘀. (𝗧𝗿𝗶𝗴𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗻𝗶𝗻𝗴𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝗮/𝗻) ༛ EDITED ༛ ༛ REWRITTEN ༛ ༛ NEW CHAPTERS FROM ASHER'S POV ༛Kumpleto
"How could you tell me when your all focus was on this freaking witch! When you should have paid attention to me! YOUR OWN WIFE! BUT NO YOU HAD ANOTHER SIDE CHICK FOR THAT!. DISGUSTING!" "ANAYA SHUTUP!" He marched towards me, full red in anger. "ASHER! DON'T!" I heard Daniyal bhai's demanding shout. "Ask her to get out of my sight!" He glared me. "Really? After everything you did to me. You want me to get out of your sight?" I mocked. "Yes or else you won't like what I will say next." I stared him. What a jerk he is.. ________________________________________ When young souls get tied into a knot together and that too incidentally, Asher would start to hate her but the Anaya always waits for him to be nice with her. But Asher's on and off behavior made Anaya tired and lose control and when she decided to end their relationship, Asher started to build feelings for her. But Anaya started to hate him more. How will they end up together when they never wanted to be in any kind of relationship in such a young age. let's see how Asher will treat her and how Anaya will tolerate him more.
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