The Legacy. Of Totalitarianism. In a Tundra.

(Not 4Chan, serious version of their idea) A perspective of a young man, living in a war torn nomadic tribal wild tundra.

It's an actually coherent story with a central idea and I hope someone finds this at least peculiar. So I stumbled upon this book multiple thousands of people wrote together on 4chan, then decided to look deeper into it and found a bunch of websites for collaborative wriring. Wanted to see what would come out of them, but they all ended up being dead. For one of them I wrote this short story, more of a tech demo, with the same name as the 4chan book but taken more or less seriously. I am the furthest thing from a writer, and am definitely stepping on other's turfs, but it's not horrible compared to other amateur stuff I've read. As I am not a writer, I don't really know how to judge my own creations and deal with getting locked into your own perspective after going through making the piece. Just want to hear if it feels like something is really behind the story, if it lets people imagine their own "aesthetic", if it works as a core idea in any way. It's going on wattpad and all, but here's the link to the original website because it has a pretty good reader and anyone can continue writing the story at any point for themselves, which could be interesting: https://www.storyfork.app/story/5a68_the-legacy-of-totalitarianism-in-a-tundra