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Last published Tue, Jul 23, 2024
Valerian Petrov, a high school student from Russia moved to America, Milton, Massachusetts for a better education and to go to Harvard. He got into a very expensive High school by his aunt paying for it. His aunt shortly left after sometime though, so he lived by himself in one of the dormitories for the time being. And he was sometimes bullied by a boy named Kourosh
He met Michael Yang. They began to be friends and hang out. One day, Michael gets invited to a graduation party by Emma Miller, Kourosh's partner at the time. Michael brought Valerian with him. When they get to the party the light go off, then they hear screams. And when the lights go back on they see blood and a persons head being missing. The doors were locked so no one could get away. They only had 13 hours to guess who the killer was.
What's gonna happen next? Will they find out who this mysterious could've been? Or will everyone die in those 13 hours?
(This story doesn't take in this timeline.)
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