A Lieutenant and A Commander
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Last published Tue, Apr 16, 2024
In the New Year's Eve of 1980, a college student named Lydia - lover of military and swordsmanship, meets her unfortunate end. As she dies, she goes to Heaven and begins her adventure in the afterlife.
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Before the story starts, a quick disclaimer - I'm not a talented writer, English isn't my native language, and this is my first fanfic, so I apologize for any mistakes I made. I'll gladly accept feedback, to improve my writing skills. The cover art is made by me, I dunno if I can change it later, but if it's possible, I probably will.
Well, that's it for now. Enjoy!
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