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Project Rewrite
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Ongoing, First published Apr 19, 2024
So I was in a tiny private Christian school for 3-8th grades, and we had a writing competition every year called Young Authors. Unfortunately for me, Young Authors had several  strict rules about our stories, and often my teachers had Opinions that influenced the story in a negative manner. It was an annual tradition that I would come home complaining about something my teacher had done to my story, or something they had made me put in or take out.

Well, I've been graduated for almost three years now, so screw 'em. I'm taking my stories back.  Here's the plan: six  parts, one for each year. I'll put the original first, if you want to read it, then the rewrite(s). A couple of them might have multiple rewrites. They definitely will be different, because my style has changed drastically. At least one of them will be barely recognizable from the original. 

Before we get into it, a couple of warnings:
1. CRINGE- Most of these stories are so cringe, y'all 😂 Granted, I wrote them from the ages of  8-13, but still. Don't come at me, I know they're bad, especially the originals. You have the power and permission to skip 'em. 
2. Religious mentions/themes- I mean, it was a private Christian school. Need I say more? Anyways, several of them had Christian morals or themes forced into them by my teachers. I think most of them are going to come out, but a couple of them are so tightly woven that removing them is harder. 
3. Covers and illustrations: Y'all, do not come after my illustrations. Please. I suck at art. I know this. But they made us, so I tried. 

If you're still here (and not my brother), congratulations! Here's a cookie. 🍪 Have fun reading, because I'm sure I'm going to have fun writing.
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𝙊𝙧𝙥𝙝𝙞𝙘 𝘽𝙚𝙖𝙪𝙩𝙮 | ᵗʷˢᵗ ˣ ʳᵉᵃᵈᵉʳ by RiniBo0811
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--Orphic (adj.)-- (/ˈɔːfɪk/) mysterious and entrancing; beyond ordinary understanding "𝗜𝗳 𝗺𝗲𝗻 𝗻𝗼 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗸𝗻𝗼𝘄 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘆 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘁, 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝘆 𝘄𝗲𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝘂𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗻𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱 𝘆𝗲𝘁, 𝘂𝗻𝗸𝗻𝗼𝘄𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗴𝗹𝗮𝗱 𝗼𝗳 𝗶𝘁." Unicorns. Ah, yes such beautiful creatures indeed. Mystical creatures that dwell unseen in the depths of forests, unheard from for centuries. All in plain sight yet undiscovered as the human eye can not see them. Some time ago these unicorns where driven away and captured by an ancient fire elemental fae called the Red Bull. Yet he missed one tiny and naive unicorn that hid herself in the forests deep. Her name was [Y/n]. It was not long until she found out about her fellow unicorn's capturer. As she hid far away from the fae. She was in hiding. Suddenly one day that unicorn got hit by a black carriage led by ebony horses. As she then lost conciousness, she entered the world of 𝗧𝘄𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗪𝗼𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝗹𝗮𝗻𝗱. ⤷[𝗩!𝗧𝘄𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗪𝗼𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝗹𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘅 𝗧𝗵𝗲𝗟𝗮𝘀𝘁𝗨𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗻!𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿] ୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨ © 2024 RiniBo0811 (This book cover is not my art and it will never be. Credits to the artist of this picture.)
Book 6: Fabled Songs by MysticMew90
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Atlantis Academy: The First Element by AutumnKalquist
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--Orphic (adj.)-- (/ˈɔːfɪk/) mysterious and entrancing; beyond ordinary understanding "𝗜𝗳 𝗺𝗲𝗻 𝗻𝗼 𝗹𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗲𝗿 𝗸𝗻𝗼𝘄 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘆 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗮𝘁, 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗺𝗮𝘆 𝘄𝗲𝗹𝗹 𝗯𝗲 𝘂𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗻𝘀 𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗹𝗱 𝘆𝗲𝘁, 𝘂𝗻𝗸𝗻𝗼𝘄𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗴𝗹𝗮𝗱 𝗼𝗳 𝗶𝘁." Unicorns. Ah, yes such beautiful creatures indeed. Mystical creatures that dwell unseen in the depths of forests, unheard from for centuries. All in plain sight yet undiscovered as the human eye can not see them. Some time ago these unicorns where driven away and captured by an ancient fire elemental fae called the Red Bull. Yet he missed one tiny and naive unicorn that hid herself in the forests deep. Her name was [Y/n]. It was not long until she found out about her fellow unicorn's capturer. As she hid far away from the fae. She was in hiding. Suddenly one day that unicorn got hit by a black carriage led by ebony horses. As she then lost conciousness, she entered the world of 𝗧𝘄𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗪𝗼𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝗹𝗮𝗻𝗱. ⤷[𝗩!𝗧𝘄𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗪𝗼𝗻𝗱𝗲𝗿𝗹𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘅 𝗧𝗵𝗲𝗟𝗮𝘀𝘁𝗨𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗻!𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿] ୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨୧‿̩͙ ˖︵ ꕀ⠀ ♱⠀ ꕀ ︵˖ ‿̩͙୨ © 2024 RiniBo0811 (This book cover is not my art and it will never be. Credits to the artist of this picture.)