Eternal Love

Eternal Love

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"Salam kenal, Aku Erine." Dia tersenyum sambil mengulurkan tangannya. Oline mendongak, seraya ikut tersenyum dikala orang didepannya tersenyum sampai-sampai matanya juga ikut tersenyum. Lucu sekali, pikirnya. Dia membalas uluran tangan itu, "Oline, Oline Manuel Pradipta." Jawab Oline. "Dari awal emang kita nggak akan pernah bisa bersatu ya, Rin." Ucapnya dari kejauhan sambil menatap dua sejoli yang sedang bermesraan. "Aku bakal jaga kamu dari jauh ya, Rin. Kamu kelihatan baik baik aja, dan bahagia sama dia. Semoga, takdir menyetujui kalian." Ucap Oline lagi, lalu berlalu menjauh dari sana. Meninggalkan tempat itu. halo readers! kenalin, gua lila. ini cerita pertama gua, yang awalnya tadi gua plin plan mau publish apa nggak, tapi kalo nggak dipublish sayang dong? jadi, gua ngeluarin cerita pertama gua ini disini, di akun ini. dulu, gua pernah bikin cerita tapi akun gua yang satu itu hilang jadi gabisa ngelanjutin cerita itu. alhasil gua buat cerita ini, semoga suka ya semuanya! oh iya, kalo ada salah kata ataupun typo mohon maaf ya, mohon bantuannya semua. -salam hangat, pacar oline.
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Karna and Draupadi. A story for many who wanted another chance for Karna and Draupadi. What if the Gods decides to give them another chance? What will happen if there was just a little bit of difference in time. Another chance for people to make right decision. They say your whole life splashes in front of your eyes just before you die. But the chances you didn't take, a chance that could alter your whole life, that chance will run after you even in your death. Question you why you didn't take them. The plot of the story starts for when the Trilok, Bramha, Vishnu, Maheshwar and all the Gods and Goddesses sees what the future holds for the Kuru dynasty and the people of Hastinapur. In the future, Mahabhart war ends and many suffers because of a family. The citizens who lost their lives, the widows, the orphans and Draupadi's mourning. The gods have decided to give them a chance but Surya Dev couldn't watch his son Karna suffers more so he comes to ask him if he also wants to be a not part of it. So with the boon he got from Bramha for all his penance, Surya Dev talks to Karna's soul after he dies in the war. He shows Karna a vision of what will happen and ask him if he actually wants to be a part of it. For once he goes back, he will wake up many years before he dies and won't know what will happen or rember this is another chance, and many events already happened. But his heart thats been wounded multiple times aches for Draupadi and he decides to come anyway, determined to change his life along with hers. He will wake up after a year of Lacsha garh but his soul will be much older. Purely fictional.

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