Lola's problems ~ a short story

Lola's problems ~ a short story

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MatureComplete Sat, May 11, 20247m

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Tagsdeath killer knivesarecool meanmenonthestreet murder

!HAS BEEN REWRITTEN! Lola is just an average girl, stuck in a room. Or I wouldn't say average... TW's: - murder - blood - death

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