The captive hero

Tom is a superhuman and he's getting ready for an evaluation of his powers to see if he could be a super hero but something isn't right.

Also this was my first try at ever writing I know it's bad and there is a lot of mistakes. I wrote it when I was like 15 and well you can definitely tell a 15 year old wrote I'm mainly posting it to see others views on it and if I should take another look at it and maybe revise it and maybe finish it. I'm planing on doing the same on some other failed attempts at writing a story I'm trying to see what I can do better as a writer and want to see if anyone could give me helpful advice on my story's

also I'm not sure how it works but I used ai for the cover and I don't want to get copyrighted so im going to give all the credit of the cover to the website https://hotpot.ai/art-generator.