The Reaping Shadow

This is my first attempt at writing a horror story. If there's any aspect that can be improved, please let me know.

"The Reaping Shadow" is a suspenseful and atmospheric horror story set in the haunting locale of Raven's Hollow. The narrative follows Eliza, a forensic psychologist with a deeply rational mind, who returns to her ancestral home to unravel the mystery behind the town's harvest season terror and her brother's disappearance. As she delves into her family's dark past, Eliza uncovers an ancient pact with a malevolent entity known as the Reaping Shadow, which demands a yearly tribute and has cursed her bloodline for generations.

The town is plagued by eerie occurrences, from phantom footsteps to blood-curdling screams emanating from the forest, leading to a palpable sense of paranoia among the residents. Eliza's investigation leads her to a hidden chamber beneath her family estate, filled with relics of arcane rituals, confirming that the Reaping Shadow is not merely a myth but a tangible threat.