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Aldragon
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Ongoing, First published May 19, 2024
Ich veröffentliche hier das erste Kapitel meines Romans "Aldragon." Ich suche nach lese willigen Menschen, die diesen kurzen Abschnitt meines Romans lesen und mir, wenn gewollt eine Rückmeldung da lassen. Ich kann meinen Schreibstil selbst nicht bewerten, deswegen brauche ich deine Hilfe. :)

Das erste Kapitel handelt von Andulin, ein junger Elf, der mit seinem Drachen Luminel ein friedliches Leben bei den Windelfen führt. Eine schicksalhafte Nacht soll jedoch sein und das Leben des Windelfen Volkes für immer verändern.  Lass dich von Andulin auf eine Fantasy Reise nehmen. Voller Drachen, Elfen, Zwergen und andern Fabelwesen. 

Bitte seht mir Tippfehler nach. Der Roman ist noch nicht durch ein Korrektorat gegangen.
Das gezeigte Cover ist ein lizenzfreies Bild von Pixabay.

Viel Spaß beim Lesen!
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