The Loving Gatsby (the Great Gatsby)

I hated the way The Great Gatsby ended. All who have read the book and know what happened can agree that the ending was crap. So I decided to rewrite it and give Jay Gatsby another chance with a character I made up.... This will be under heavy editing, all I have is the draft on paper but i hope this isn't too cringe or too bland. I intend on this being a short story but who knows it might go on longer than expected ;). I hope you enjoy :) (btw I don't own any of these characters except my own who will be introduced in the story)