An Evening With You

Some times, I wander, how it would feel to spend some moments with you
Like on beach, mountains, parks, lakes??
or it would something like the description in below poem??
Yes, an evening with you.... want to spend an evening, just an evening with you. ...
I am not at all a professional poet or any kind of experienced person in poem writing...
Bare me for my mistakes and comment for any improvement or for any kind of suggestions...
hope you all will love my work... happy reading