THE BREAKFAST CLUB - REWRITE
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5 teenagers find themselves on a Saturday in 1984 in detention, for whatever reason they've ended up there. A karateka, an astronomer, a writer, a gamer, and an animal lover.
They all go to Shermer High School, but all have other friend groups.
What will happen, when these 5 will spend an all-day detention in a library? Will they become enemies, friends, or even something more than friends...
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This is a rewrite of the 1985s movie The Breakfast Club, meaning the movie itself doesn't belong to me, but to John Hughes.
I didn't use the characters in the actual movie, but my friends. So I'm sorry if you came for them!
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