Truth hurts

Welcome to the town that has always been quite, tucked away in secrecy with only one train line that takes you out of this small crater. Upon your arrival as a new detective back to visit your old group of friends after 15 years, you know something's not quite right... discovering that one of your dearest friends has committed suicide, something tells you otherwise. Digging deeper into what happened not only do you find the past of others but also the past of yourself. The question now is who did it?

Hey guys I'd like to just clarify that this is a beginning draft, so I'd love to hear your thoughts of what you think of it so far!