The Perfect Daughter
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Natalia Martinez is your average town girl she is friendly and everyone loves her. She has a twin brother, Nathaniel, the school's bad boy, everywhere he goes trouble appears how can two of the same kind be different in many ways? She spends most of her weekends sleeping or catching up on school work. She spends her evening studying because her parents want her to go to an Ivy League school. Everyone knows she'll be the next valedictorian. What no one knows she has secrets not even her own family knows about. She isn't as perfect of a daughter as everyone thought she was. At night she sneaks out and nobody knows but what happens when she gets caught?
"What the hell from all the people it had to be you" he growled at me.
"What!? You can't believe I'm a girl" I smirked. He rolled his eyes.
"Anyways where is that asshole you call brother" he scowled.
"Don't involve him in this he has nothing to do with this and FYI he's my twin" I hissed at him.
What happens when one of the guys from her school catches her at night. Will her cover be blown? Will her image of the perfect daughter be ruined or will he be trustworthy and keep the secret.
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