Naive Out of Time
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  • Parts 7
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Ongoing, First published Jun 15, 2024
Maico Gritzwel Ovailon

It's normal for every humane to possess kindness, after all there is humanity when there's kindness. But when kindness was over used, how can one individual still act as modest and lovely? Its not always about how you treat everyone, but it should also about how everyone treats you; when there's no respect that given, then you aren't bound to give them one. 

The beauty of one individual doesn't always measure by their looks, but rather on how they treat the mankind. What's the use of being pretty? What's the use of having title or to be known by your power, when you doesn't have even a bit of generosity? 

Maico is a perfect example of it; she represent the people who once possess kindness-known for being generous, but then a single mishap turns her life upside down. The once vibrant ray of sun, turns into chaotic sorrow of despair. She thought she's generous, yet after the realization she found herself as a clueless individual-naive. She's been over use plenty of times; people that had connection with her from the past was only taken advantage of how kind she was. They don't treated her as humane, rather they treat her as a tool that can be easy to manipulate.

What will happen when one individual turn into a person you doesn't realize they can be? How can you turns the time back from its past, when all along you are the one who broke the past? You can't change the past, you can't turn its time; only you can do is to face the havoc of the person you once used. Karma is a bitch they say, and maybe its really true. Because when she came back, she proves it again.
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