Death's Curse

It was Aradia's first year at Hogwarts and she was very perturbed. She was awfully worried that she would get lost or get into another house other than Slytherin. Mostly, because she was frightened to let her father down, after the death of her mother, Astoria. All she wants is a better relationship with her father and brother. Off at Hogwarts will she sink and fall or will she shoot up like a rocket?

This is my first post so please give me feedback in the comments!

Characters I created (Some last names belong to J.K Rowling like, Malfoy, Carrow, etc.):
Aradia
Nyx
Flynn
Connor
Ora
Alexander (Alex)
Eliza
Stephen

Smaller characters like Sara, Benji, etc.

ALL OTHER CHARACTERS BELONG TO J.K ROWLING