Destiny (Book The Fall)

Legendary Knight in shinning armor, heart of gold, mind sharper than a sword, finds himself battling a insidious foe... The Lich.

A creature of unnatural origins, supernatural and wicked beyond what most can conceive, for what is more terrifying than a undead wizard.

Note: One of my personal favorites. The legendary Knight in shining armor riding off into the night to save the girl (something the world has sadly lost)
Courage incarnate, Jagis character is somewhere in between Superman and Captian America. Pure in mind, soul, and body. Facing overwhelming and horrifying odds, he does not hesitate to do what's right, even if it will cost him his life.

This was never meant to be a stand-alone chapter. This original script was meant to be a sole, and brief flashback into his character and history. More and more people said this would be a chapter to actually lead the book with and demanded more details, more interactions of him with a significant party in this chapter. I'm still considering doing that, but I need more feedback.

Option 1. Just a brief flashback that would be placed in the second book, as an Easter egg of sorts.
Option 2. Add to it, truly develop the chapter, and place it in the beginning of the series.

As with all chapters sent for the reader, they are reading unconnected chapters. Mainly origin stories that could hypothetically be placed anywhere in the book.

My goal with this character was simple, bring back valor, honor, integrity, and chivalry. Make people truly wish to adhere to what has left us as a people. As the book continues, this character beautifully demonstrates just that.