Don't Let Me Go
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Last published Tue, Oct 17, 2017
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"I loved you." I whispered, he knew this already and I didn't know how telling him helped any.
"And I broke you." He stated back. I kept quiet, of course we both knew what had happened 6 years ago. "So let me try and mend you."
I blinked. Why did he care now? Why was he acting sorry, because I knew he didn't care. I shook my head, "You've done enough."
"Give me a chance Naomi, please." I turned to leave, but I heard his voice say so softly, "Please don't let go, not yet."
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After being hurt in highschool by him 6 years ago, Naomi Ashlyn finds herself living in the same building as Christopher Jacobs, but she wants nothing to do with him, not anymore.
Christopher had lost everything, but at the coming back of Naomi in his life, he realizes that maybe not everything had gone to waste. Hope rises in him and he at least wants to do something right in his life at least once. But she can't let him go, not yet.
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