The quiet girl

The quiet girl

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Elisa Ady, a 15 year old girl. She lost her family to a murderer. She found both her mom and her sister in front of the front door in giant black plastic bags. All their body parts ripped out. She called the police as soon as she can and police think she is shock which was the reason she wouldn't talk. So instead, they got her to write down what happened on paper. But of course there would be more to the story than 'coming home from school and found two big plastic bags laying at the front door'. She wouldn't write anymore then that. And so the police had no leads. Nothing. Elisa was then given to the social service. And the social service got her a new family for her to stay with. She wasn't herself after that. She stayed quiet or rather could not talk at all. Could she go back to her old self? Edward Jones, a 17 year old boy who has been Elisa's neighbour and boyfriend for years. They had broken up recently for no reason. And would Edward find out the reason? Elisa had already moven out with her new family when he went to her house. He couldn't find her anywhere. Would he ever find out why? Characters: Elisa Ady(main) Edward Jones(main) Cardian Ames(main? Father who adopted her) Aiden Ames(main? The other father who adopted her) Luke Hastings (side- edward's best friend) Anastasia Hastings(side- Elisa's best friend and Luke's sister) Detective Kaiden(side) detective Andy (side) Evian James(bodyguard &interpreter) (side)
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This story is about a young girl names Eve. She grew up in not the best family, she had to do everything. All the chores, all the work and she never got credit for it. One day while getting water she returned to the house to find her family gone, they took all their bags and left. She was heartbroken. But 12 years later she is 23 and she has lived out on her own since, she decided to change her name do she could start fresh. She has learned to hunt and has been doing it for years. But when she decides she isn't happy she wants to leave, start over. But that's when things get complicated, her current boyfriend, Elijah isn't happy. He won't let her leave so one night while he is sleeping, she gets out of there. She gets her bags and leaves. While out on her own a wonderful family picks her up and takes her in. When their parents leave for a trip, she is left with the two sons, Jessie and Sky. Jordyn has a liking for Jessie but eventually Elijah finds her and he isn't happy about her and Jessie. From then on, he bothers her and manipulates her. She doesn't know what to do. Break Elijah's heart, or live in fear of him for her whole life

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