The Refinement
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  • Parts 8
  • Time 56m
  • Reads 120
  • Votes 2
  • Parts 8
  • Time 56m
Ongoing, First published Jul 08, 2024
The enterprising young girl Susan Schneider has, at the age of twenty-seven, fought for a room at the top, and got it, on triel. She has now her own small fashion store in an expensive and exclusive mall. But one day a guy gets into her life, and walks through the door to her shop. She now realizes, that love doesn't always think rationally. The lucky guy, Carter, didn't get a reasonable chance in life. Carter did fail, and got beaten up by reality! Will their love be strong enough to withstand the pressure from the environment. Or are external circumstances sufficiently discouraging for the young couple by all means.
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