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The Revision [EDITING]
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Smilingpineapple
Ongoing, First published Apr 14, 2015
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|| EDITING: PLEASE BEAR WITH ME AS I'M CURRENTLY EDITING THIS STORY CHAPTER BY CHAPTER SO THAT IT MAKES MORE SENSE. THANK YOU! <3 ||

As far as Kate Stone is concerned, the world can be organized into two categories: those who have their lives together, and those who don't - and she falls into the ladder category. 

Meet Kate Stone - a girl who's just all over the place. Like many around her, she spends so much time focusing on the small things that she sometimes loses sight of the bigger picture. What will happen when Kate finally tries to organize her life, once and for all?

Musicals, sleepovers, food fights, all-nighters, and a whole lot of drama--that's what. But you never know... Maybe she'll finally learn to take a step back and just enjoy the ride. 
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Children Beware: This story contains a shitload of swearing. ;)


{{DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the photographs used on the cover or throughout the story, so credit goes to their original owners on Tumblr and whatnot.}}
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