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The Revision [EDITING]

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|| EDITING: PLEASE BEAR WITH ME AS I'M CURRENTLY EDITING THIS STORY CHAPTER BY CHAPTER SO THAT IT MAKES MORE SENSE. THANK YOU! <3 ||

As far as Kate Stone is concerned, the world can be organized into two categories: those who have their lives together, and those who don't - and she falls into the ladder category. 

Meet Kate Stone - a girl who's just all over the place. Like many around her, she spends so much time focusing on the small things that she sometimes loses sight of the bigger picture. What will happen when Kate finally tries to organize her life, once and for all?

Musicals, sleepovers, food fights, all-nighters, and a whole lot of drama--that's what. But you never know... Maybe she'll finally learn to take a step back and just enjoy the ride. 
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Children Beware: This story contains a shitload of swearing. ;)


{{DISCLAIMER: I do not own any of the photographs used on the cover or throughout the story, so credit goes to their original owners on Tumblr and whatnot.}}All Rights Reserved

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My Wildest Dreams by fhsgctcusbf

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Hope by jessicamay672

Kate was used to dealing with unfair consequences. Having a less than ideal home life and no one else to support her, she had learned to deal with things on her own. She had learned not to feel and especially not to hope. So when someone new comes into her life Kate does the best thing she can think of, she shuts them out. But, after a series of events in the course of one day, they are thrown back together, and Kate is given the chance to explain herself. Explain why she was so guarded and why she had closed herself off in the first place. And maybe along the way Kate learns that things aren't always so bad. That feeling and hoping aren't the worst things in the world. ***Warning: Mention of abuse is included in this story. Please don't read if that is a trigger for you in any way. Hope you enjoy the story. Feel free to leave comments and/or suggestions, I'm open to whatever.

Summers End by MissDicey

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She's With The Band by leilams31

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My Wildest Dreams

Josh and Katie have been best friends since he first moved nextdoor midway through freshman year. They were attached to the hip and acted like they've known each other for years. Josh Parker was the all American boy who all the girls wanted, including Katie. As Katie and Josh's friendship blossomed she quickly formed a crush on Josh, but as the years progressed, her crush turned into love. Five years after leaving Miami brokenhearted after finding out about Josh's engagement to his childhood sweetheart. Katie unexpectedly reunites with her former best friend, and Josh quickly realizes that his feelings for her are not just platonic anymore. * As I'm walking out of work I get a call from my brother to pick my niece up from school. For the past 4 years that little girl has had me wrapped around her finger and I wouldn't have it any other way. Unfortunately I got stuck in traffic on the way over so I'm late for pick up. Once I get to Melanie's classroom I fill out the sign out sheet that's on the wall and make my way into the classroom. I faintly hear Melanie laughing so I know she's not upset from me being late. "Hey I'm so sorry. I got stuck in traff..." I said stopping mid sentence, stunned at the woman in front of me. Standing in front of me is someone I considered one of the most important people to me back in highschool. As soon as I looked into those Caribbean blue that I used to know so well, I knew it was her. It takes her a few seconds to realize who I am. She stands there stunned. We continue to stare at each other until she breaks the silence. "Josh?" She asks not believing it's actually me. "Hey Katie girl." Mature content Sexual scenes Inappropriate language (Book #1 of the Dreams series)