Beyond the hills

Both Evelyn and Keiven have intruiging stories that will soon mix up into one.
19 year old Keiven Lock has a passion for becoming a knight for his kingdom. The problem is that he's a prince, not a knight. "He's meant to rule his people, not serve." King Faren said. Over hearing his father's words on how he is a disappointment to him and his kingdom, he chooses to run. He runs far to a place name Mälvolk forest known not by him, but by nearby villages as "Blood moon forests".
25 year old Evelyn Flowers, she is not.. lets say, well liked. She's clumsy, obedient, and self centered. A lot of people don't like how weird she is, but she's also kind and great with children, the local caregiver is what she's called. But what townsfold don't know is that she's a witch and one day a rumor about the "Blood Moon Flower" came around town. Collecting its petals can't be that bad... right?

Cover art By Me
Characters By Me
Story By Me

First book, I would like some critique on it.