IF ONLY I HAD KNOWN (On Hold)
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"If only I had k...known" Duryodhan mumbled, lying in a pool of blood. There was no one else around, except for Vasudev Krishn. Duryodhan's eyes spoke volumes. His lips quivered as his thighs were broken.
"If only I had known," he thought again, his life flashing before his own eyes.
Vasudev Krishn looked on, "I'm sorry Duryodhan, I tried" he looked down, His eyes filled with tears. Duryodhan forwarded his hands, gently touched his feet and looked up , unable to speak anymore, only his eyes looked into His. The words of his heart began to reach Krishna's ears. As Duryodhan neared his death, he preferred not to close his eyes, rather keep it open, to give a final adieu to the protector of worlds.
NOTE : THIS IS PURELY IMAGINARY. THERE IS NO INTENTION OF HURTING THE READER'S FEELINGS OR INSULT CULTURE! THIS IS PURELY A FAN FICTION!
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