The Betrayal
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A 10-year-old boy was walking home alone on a rainy day, tired and dreading the homework he knows he has to do for school. He sighs as he continues to get closer and closer to his home. As he climbed up the steps to the door, he realized that the door was opened. The boy was confused at this because he knew that his parents wouldn't leave the door open, even when they were home. As he hesitantly walks through the door, he is met with an uncomfortable silence throughout the house. Knowing that this was not normal, he became worried and quickly ran up the stairs to find his parents. As he reaches his parents' bedroom, he slowly goes to grab the doorknob and hesitantly turns and opens the door...
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