If someone decide to read it all the way, you will realize the story is a bit splitted in 2 sides a person that visits back his own memories. Were I focus on how much I can play with the story with using small details and presenting everything with in the end kinda just turning everything into a basic typical horror story Unlike the last story I made I actually took my own memories and thoughts into the first part of the story so the first half can feel maybe a bit deep it is because in some way I kinda used the story to get some stuff off my chest stuff that i have been dragging onto my back even when I think I have been denying it to myself for a while