Take on Things (Critique Shop)

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Hello, I am Bokkie Dee! If you want feedback for your story, you're in the right place. Take on Things is a writing critique shop where I try to give constructive feedback and opinions about your piece.

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PART 1 Do you need names for your characters? Feel free to browse this and find the names that you're looking for! Names: Canadian, Dark Warrior, Korean, Royal, Ice, Greek and Roman Mythology, Irish, Robot from Movies, From Harry Potter, Color, Magical Witch & Warlock, Nature, Greek Gods & Goddesses, Gemstone, Badass, Mermaid/ Merman, Fire, Worst Name Meaning, Good with Bad Meaning, Gothic, Japanese, Inspired by elements, Spirit, Dragon, Cat, Inspired by Season & Months, 4 Season, Fantansy Names, Vampire & Demon, Egyptian, Elf, Cool Pirate, Space, French and many more.

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PART 1 Do you need names for your characters? Feel free to browse this and find the names that you're looking for! Names: Canadian, Dark Warrior, Korean, Royal, Ice, Greek and Roman Mythology, Irish, Robot from Movies, From Harry Potter, Color, Magical Witch & Warlock, Nature, Greek Gods & Goddesses, Gemstone, Badass, Mermaid/ Merman, Fire, Worst Name Meaning, Good with Bad Meaning, Gothic, Japanese, Inspired by elements, Spirit, Dragon, Cat, Inspired by Season & Months, 4 Season, Fantansy Names, Vampire & Demon, Egyptian, Elf, Cool Pirate, Space, French and many more.

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