Melloyern: 13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing
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Complete, First published Jul 25, 2024
"You sure you want to be a magician?" ask an old woman to a boy.
   "yes Granny Ren. I will be the greatest magician of all Melloyern." He said enthusiastically as the Granny softly caress his small and smooth hand.

   The boy then ran to his friends as one of them calling him to play football. The Granny look at the boy silently with a solemn smile. Her eye narrow in a soft and gentle gaze she give to the kids that was playing at her yard.

   "He will be." she said before stand and walk to a well.

   The boy were born as a normal human. There is no easy way for him to be a magician. he has no mana in him. Or that's what everyone expect from him.

    Writer: "Hey, that's enough reminiscing about your past. it's the story description section. Not the story yet!"
    Nakajima: "Fine. I will start with the description."

   Writer: " good. get back to work."

   13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing, as the name suggest, It was about a holy crystal that blessed a land. like a mainland or somesort. So...

   Writer: "is that really the right way to make a description?"

   Nakajima: *sigh*

   There is a mainland with 13 state under a flag named Melloyern. These all 13 state have it's very own holy crystal that bless the state individually. But, the crystal contains powerful amount of mana that makes every single person in Melloyern going for it.

   A group of magician called Denials were up to collect all of the crystal to keep them safe from wrong hands. There is a lot of hindrance in their path such as the Kingdom of Melloyern itself is turning against these guys. Still there are more.

   Can they survive? it's up to them to decide. Can they achieve what they aim for? It's always up to them to decide their own future.

   Nakajima: "Satisfied?"

   Writer: *Claps his hands many time* "Very much."

   Nakajima: " Can I keep daydreaming?"

   Writer: " what did you say? You also in the story so... get in there!"

   Nakajima: *sigh and step into the story*
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The Mystics Of Valenthia

39 parts Complete

"So who the heck am I?" I stared defiantly at Freya. "I am a normal person. I go to high school. I have parents. What am I ?" I asked. "That is what we need to find out. Do you trust us enough to stay with us? Help us? You are powerful. You are the only Palenthian, first time in centuries who has magic inside her. Powerful magic. More powerful than most Valen. I can feel it. Stay with us and help us slay monsters. Please." I gulped. "What will I get for that?" "Answers." Renna Evans was just another normal girl in another normal world, living with her normal (and filthy rich) parents and going to a normal high school. Basically her life was as normal as could be. Until she went on a normal walk on a hill side. Little did Renna know that from that point, her life would be anything but normal. Welcome to the world of Renna Evans; a world which is divided into two parts. Those who call themselves The Valenthians, possessing power and magic; and those without it are the Palenthians. What is Renna, really? Will she be able to do what is called upon her? Will she be able to place the pieces of the puzzle which will give her the perfect (or heart-shattering) picture of her past? Will she be able to prove her worth in this new world? Or will her world collapse? And what about the handsome but mysterious Ryan Carter? What exactly is he hiding? Renna will discover a world of peace and war, love and hatred, trust and betrayal; all in her single quest for one thing. FREEDOM.