One Last Big Job
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Last published Wed, Aug 21, 2024
After being in a band for 2 years and finally performing their first REAL concert something goes awry, so the 4 lifelong friends:
Matt, Erick, Noah, and Jacob, start thinking of a way to get money. Then, they all finally got it, a heist.
A heist to steal Mr Santiagos prize possession. A statue of a dollar made of pure ruby. Mr Santiago is the richest and most respected man of city. after a week of planning, the heist is in action.
VERY SLOWPACED STORY
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Story will occasionally be told with a -E or -M etc, format. Only if theirs a lot of "says, utters, whispers" etc.
P.ss Story contains the following:
Weed, alcohol, smoking, etc, references.(especially chapter 2)
Mature language.
Gun violence.
Gore, blood, detailed deaths.
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