Obsidian eyes (rewrite)

And as the final bell rang for the year, the final moment of peace and tranquility in the small, Minnesotan town, the chaos of the 10th graders caused several parents to walk out on they're porches and watch the groups of friends skip and laugh by. The last happy moment, before total destruction: the beginning of the wars. Just hours after the final bell, the darkness swept over the neighborhoods and the bonfire parties, causing mass confusion. And it wasn't until the darkness came out that they realized they were in great danger. The fight for survival will begin, and the only person that could help them will try her hardest to stop the wars.

This is a rewrite of "Obsidian Eyes" and I'm hopping that this will turn out a lot better!