Mirror of Embers (re-written)
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This is the re-written version of Mirror of Embers (so far). There is a lot more that needs to be added and fixed, but this is what I have so far and what I would like to share with you all.
Please, I implore you, to tell me what works and what doesn't. Should some things be kept or should things be scrapped. I want opinions and feedback. This is one of the only ways I can get feedback on my work, so I'd love to hear what you have to say.
Sorry, it's been a while. I'm going into my third year of university and incredibly burnt out. Somedays I hate this story and other days I love it. I'm searching for that love again, and I hope your support and feedback can help me remember it.
That's all from me right now, hope you enjoy. And if there are any new readers to this, please read the description on the original Mirror of Embers to discern what this book is about. The same trigger warnings on that book apply to this one. Read at your own discretion.
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